Sensuous, sweet and exciting, she waited with bated breath for him, this sunny afternoon.
It’s been a long wait; a year to be exact!
Oh, how she longed to quench her carnal desires, to get lost in his insanity, his pleasures.
She tasted the sweetness of his lips, moaned with her head still back and her eyes closed.
He smiled through her gasps, the pants and the pleasures of her submissive flesh.
“You are delicious!”, she said…
… to the ripe, yellow mango in hand.
Ah, Life! And it’s simple pleasures!
I am taking part in The Write Tribe Problogger October 2017 Blogging Challenge and FridayReflections by Corinne and Sanch. The prompt for today is Bated Breath.
Shouldn’t hv read this at night!! 😃
😂 Very clever! Mango season is just starting here and I’m excited!
Omg it’s almost 2 am and now I’m super hungry. 😁
Ah.. love mango.. and the way you have described.. making me drool..
Hahahah!! Smart girl… that was a sensual twist in the plot 😉
Wow, what a twist. beautiful.
Hehe .. I was having some vivid imaginations. The mango distracted me.
This was too good Shalini… A twist of the tale 😉
Carnal indeed!! Great stretch of imagination used here Shalzz I didnt see this coming!!!
Mango does ‘that’ to so many of us. 🙂
I can relate to this. Very much. 😉 Not needed to say more.
Oh wow, I was getting a lot of naughty thoughts before the mango brought me down. Great twist! Loved this.
Oh this was such a tease!! 😀
What yaar, Shalini! All the things I was imagining came crashing down with a thud when I came across the word, ‘MANGO’! Reminded me of the Katrina KAif advert…”aam ki pyaas!” 😛
Too good!
A mango? Are you sure you didn’t substitute the deuit for someone tall dark and handsome? Me thinks you told a lovely tale ….
Ah! Now that’s clever Shalini 😛 Ha ha it was irresistible narration ! Juicy and delicious mangoes are indeed heavenly as described by you!
Ahem! The Twist in the end eh!! Reminds me of the Kartina Kaif’s advertisements!
Very smart, aren’t you? hahaha, super piece!
Naughty naughty! But a good Alphonso mango does that to me too 😜
I kept waiting for the twist and still it left me smiling. Went back and read it again with the suspense now revealed. Great writing!