As days pass by and nights are long,
I still cherish our first kiss and tag along.
I trembled as you grabbed my waist and held me close
So close that my eyes shied away and a smile engross.
Your eyes spoke a million words
And like a dew drop caressing a bright red rose,
Your lips had touched mine and the world echoed good oh!
I caught a glimpse of shooting stars in the sky, heard music in my ears
Was there a background score or were they mere butterflies stirring in my stomach?
I wish we could re-live those moments
The stolen glances, kisses and a walk hand-in-hand.
Come back soon, darling
the wait is too long!
Awesome as always!!! Touching , romantic and what not!! Keep writing!! God bless!!
Yay.. thanks, Anoop!! After all these years, this is your first comment on my blog! Welcome and looking forward for more 🙂
They want me to create an id before commenting!! Strange aajarams you know!!!
hihi… so now that you have one, keep reading and pour in your thoughts! Pakka??
Wow…Nce one shalu..aftr reading i felt as if i had experienced one!!..Keep writing.
Aww…. that’s so sweet and what else can I ask for!! 😀
Oh so beautiful ! Brilliantly written 🙂
Thank you… keep visiting.. 🙂
Awww so romantic!!!
Thanks, Kathy… 🙂
Aww, that was sweet and romantic. Ah, those intense emotions of first love! How I remember!
Thanks, Cat… wink wink
The first kiss is, well, the first kiss right? Nothing can compare… You have beautifully brought out the essence of it all 🙂
Thanks, Naba… <3
Don’t we all want to relive that one moment !! Splendid poem dear. Just love the way your writing is growing. Awesome Shalini.
Yay…*clicking my heels in the air* means a lot ,Inderpreet… yes, I called you by name. Finally. Feeling all ajeeb sa. 🙂
How romantic! Would love to play my first kiss over and over in my mind!!
Thank you… 🙂 keep visiting….
Beautifully romantic !!
awwww sooo sweettt 😀 beautiful poem.
Awww….perfect one for V Day!
So sweet!
thanks, Shilpa. Wrote a long time ago. I was sending all these posts in drafts but this one got re-published! 🙂