It’s a Spicy Saturday Pick!!
And the top pick at 10/10. Read it here:
This is a reflection of life- on all commitments past,
I’ve suffered torments and tortures which still leave me aghast.
My pride and morals are inundated by scorn and disdain
What is kept as art is relegated to tear apart
I’m searching for answers and is not checking my past,
Nor am I planning any future, as it’s in vain.
Thoughts written down, but I am on the wrong page
Destroyed wishes and dreams become more than mere frustrated rage.
I’m attempting to stay quiet and not making a scene
My lost baby, you will be close to my heart.
Written for 10/10 Tuesday based on the prompt ‘Close To My Heart’ hosted by Cynthia and Deepika.
Very touching, Shalini. Lost baby will always stay close to heart,I have some experience in that area..
I’m so sorry to hear that, Vinitha. But I believe you are one strong lady. God bless!!
That was very touching shalini. That’s the worst thing to ever happen. Welcome to 10/10 Tuesdays. See you there next week too.
Thanks Cynthia. I loved writing for your 10/10. Great concept! And I’ll participate in the coming days 🙂 Thanks for stopping by.
The Joker is sad reading this…:( No comments…
Wow!! I could make you sad? The Joker should have a smiling face always 🙂
Hmm. That loss is too hard to take. I know a friend who had, and she wasn’t the same till she became a mum again. Poignant tale, so true for many.
I know… can’t compare to any other pain in the world! Thanks for stopping by, Leo. 🙂
How tragic for the one who bore the loss, Shalini. So tough to put into words.
I know… 🙁 Thanks for stopping by, Mam.
It’s so touching and emotional, Shalini.Brilliant poem:)
Thanks, Vishal. Glad you liked. Thanks for stopping by.
Very moving poem. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks for stopping by, Laurel. Keep visiting. 🙂
Very touching poem,Shalini.
Thank you very much, Mam.
This is a very poignant expression, Shalini!
Thanks, Shilpa…. …
Poignant, Shalini. It’s not a loss I would wish on my worst enemy.
I know… it’s a pain that is incomparable with anything in the world!
Hey shalini we have a surprise for you on this week’s 10/10 Tuesdays. Do check it out here.http://blogatcynthia.blogspot.in/2014/10/1010-tuesday-prompt-2-water.html?m=1
Oh Dear Lord!Oh Dear Lord!Oh Dear Lord! 🙂 Thanks a lot for picking it as the top post. Thanks for the encouragement and warmth. I’m just leaping with joy! Yayyyy!!!! 😀