It’s a Spicy Saturday Pick!!
And the top pick at 10/10. Read it here:
This is a reflection of life- on all commitments past,
I’ve suffered torments and tortures which still leave me aghast.
My pride and morals are inundated by scorn and disdain
What is kept as art is relegated to tear apart
I’m searching for answers and is not checking my past,
Nor am I planning any future, as it’s in vain.
Thoughts written down, but I am on the wrong page
Destroyed wishes and dreams become more than mere frustrated rage.
I’m attempting to stay quiet and not making a scene
My lost baby, you will be close to my heart.
Written for 10/10 Tuesday based on the prompt ‘Close To My Heart’ hosted by Cynthia and Deepika.
Vinitha says
Very touching, Shalini. Lost baby will always stay close to heart,I have some experience in that area..
Shalzzz says
I’m so sorry to hear that, Vinitha. But I believe you are one strong lady. God bless!!
itzzzjuzcynthia says
That was very touching shalini. That’s the worst thing to ever happen. Welcome to 10/10 Tuesdays. See you there next week too.
Shalzzz says
Thanks Cynthia. I loved writing for your 10/10. Great concept! And I’ll participate in the coming days 🙂 Thanks for stopping by.
The Joker says
The Joker is sad reading this…:( No comments…
Shalzzz says
Wow!! I could make you sad? The Joker should have a smiling face always 🙂
Vinay Leo R. says
Hmm. That loss is too hard to take. I know a friend who had, and she wasn’t the same till she became a mum again. Poignant tale, so true for many.
Shalzzz says
I know… can’t compare to any other pain in the world! Thanks for stopping by, Leo. 🙂
Shailaja/ The Moving Quill says
How tragic for the one who bore the loss, Shalini. So tough to put into words.
Shalzzz says
I know… 🙁 Thanks for stopping by, Mam.
vishalbheeroo says
It’s so touching and emotional, Shalini.Brilliant poem:)
Shalzzz says
Thanks, Vishal. Glad you liked. Thanks for stopping by.
Laurel Regan says
Very moving poem. Thank you for sharing.
Shalzzz says
Thanks for stopping by, Laurel. Keep visiting. 🙂
menons129 says
Very touching poem,Shalini.
Shalzzz says
Thank you very much, Mam.
Shilpa Garg says
This is a very poignant expression, Shalini!
Shalzzz says
Thanks, Shilpa…. …
Michelle Liew says
Poignant, Shalini. It’s not a loss I would wish on my worst enemy.
Shalzzz says
I know… it’s a pain that is incomparable with anything in the world!
itzzzjuzcynthia says
Hey shalini we have a surprise for you on this week’s 10/10 Tuesdays. Do check it out here.http://blogatcynthia.blogspot.in/2014/10/1010-tuesday-prompt-2-water.html?m=1
Shalzzz says
Oh Dear Lord!Oh Dear Lord!Oh Dear Lord! 🙂 Thanks a lot for picking it as the top post. Thanks for the encouragement and warmth. I’m just leaping with joy! Yayyyy!!!! 😀